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Victor Kulkosky's avatar

A thing I do from time to time is sit at the counter in a Waffle House and watch the short-order cooks. They hear orders, without writing anything down, and move constantly, not quickly, as you might imagine, but with measured efficiency, doing a few things at once, rarely messing up. No wasted effort or motion. It's what we call, "poetry in motion," a cliche, but a useful one.

In the popular imagination, and the imagination of many poets, Waffle House is as far from poetry as can be. Yet, those who know, or bother to observe, can see poetry in plumbing or short-order cooking. A skilled mechanic hears music in the car engine he can identify by make and model without seeing it. A carpenter can wax poetic about well-made kitchen cabinets and scoff at overpriced, under-quality work. I have heard that there are computer programmers who write code with a degree of elegance not necessary to get the job done, but do it anyway because of pride in their craft.

The connection between the trades and poetry is craft, the skill in making a thing. Craft isn't romantic; it involves skilled work, which takes time to learn, and time to use, much longer than jotting down a thought, breaking it into short lines with arbitrary punctuation and capitalization, and posting it to Instagram.

I'm turning 65 this year, and have written poetry since my teens, but I was too invested in the romantic mythology of inspiration to bother much with craft. My facility with language was enough to dazzle my small readership of family and friends, but little I've written so far is likely to outlive me. So now, with whatever time I'm granted, I'm taking craft more seriously, both in what I read and what I attempt to write. I can find inspiration from plumbers as much as poets. A plumbers' materials are pipes, joints and whatever else plumbers work on, while his tools are wrenches and so on; a poet's materials are words, his tools are metaphor, rhythm, irony, etc. It's takes as much skill and dedication to install a sink, sew a quilt or weave a basket as it does to write a poem. Anyone who pays attention can admire the work of all.

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Frances O'Roark Dowell's avatar

Thanks for the introduction to Jesse Bertran! I look forward to reading his work.

I'm glad you discovered Philip Levine. He's one of my favorite poets, and I was fortunate to get to spend time with him on a couple of occasions back in the day, so I can also report that he was a great human being as well. For anyone who's curious about his writing, here's a short poem.

Making it Work

by Philip Levine

3-foot blue cannisters of nitro

along a conveyor belt, slow fish

speaking the language of silence.

On the roof, I in my respirator

patching the asbestos gas lines

as big around as the thick waist

of an oak tree. “These here are

the veins of the place, stuff

inside’s the blood.” We work in rain,

heat, snow, sleet. First warm

spring winds up from Ohio, I

pause at the top of the ladder

to take in the wide world reaching

downriver and beyond. Sunlight

dumped on standing and moving

lines of freight cars, new fields

of bright weeds blowing, scoured

valleys, false mountains of coke

and slag. At the ends of sight

a rolling mass of clouds as dark

as money brings the weather in.

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